Talk:Religion for Atheists

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I asked for clarification on what the rejected message meant, and I got back this clarification. My last question, to the best of my knowledge, was not answered by the reviewer, so I am copying the history link here instead of the text. --110.20.234.69 (talk) 21:51, 7 January 2015 (UTC)

Critic
Little Organization...Just throws a ton of info in your face...Change tone...

Where to go from here
I tried the online chat function, and got the suggestion to trim the contents section and expand the reception section, so that the contents section is shorter than the reception section. (Which is really hard, because it's a tough book.) I can't really use the reviews in the contents section, because the reviews don't really focus on what the book is about as much as what the reviewers thought of the book. --110.20.234.69 (talk) 03:52, 20 February 2015 (UTC)