Talk:Remembering You (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:28, 13 July 2019 (UTC)

Was going to make "Touch the Sky" a GA before I reviewed one again, but there's nearly 20 in the que so I'll take this on. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:28, 13 July 2019 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * It is tendency to only reference one release date in the infobox and this should be the radio one as that is what is cited as the release date for singles commonly
 * Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:35, 13 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Add the studio parameter for Ed Cash's house
 * Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:35, 13 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Only cite EMI CMG as label due to two above
 * Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:35, 13 July 2019 (UTC)
 * "by Caleb Chapman and Steven Curtis Chapman" → "by Caleb Chapman and Chapman"
 * Done. Toa Nidhiki05 15:35, 13 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Also, why is David Campbell not mentioned in the lead when he also composed the song? I know he's not a lyricist but he still helped compose it.
 * Fixed. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 15:35, 13 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Add release year of the album in brackets
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 15:35, 13 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "with Celtic and folk influences and" → "with Celtic and folk influences, and" for separation of description i.e grammar rule
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 15:35, 13 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "who praised its sound" → "who praised the sound" as you say it later in the sentence
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 15:35, 13 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Don't think the second sentence is notable for the lead
 * Removed it. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 15:35, 13 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "was released to both Christian and mainstream radio, peaking at No. 9 on the Billboard Christian Songs chart and No. 22 on the Billboard Adult Contemporary chart; it ranked as one of the most-played songs of 2006 on Christian radio." → "was released to Christian radio stations on August 5, 2005, and ranked as one of the most-played songs of 2006 on Christian radio. It peaked at number nine on the Billboard Christian Songs and number 22 on the Billboard Adult Contemporary charts respectively." remember you don't write out numbers under 11 as numbers
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 15:35, 13 July 2019 (UTC)


 * WikiLink Christian radio

Background and recording

 * Add a picture of Chapman in here with appropriate text; something like "Chapman helped movie studios attract a Christian audience." and remember alt text
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "widely popular among Christians" → "widely popular among this audience"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Remove WikiLink to the accompanying album as you shouldn't WikiLink it in the body
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "to Christians" → "to a Christian audience" to maintain consistency
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "learned of the production of a" → "learned of the production behind a"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "novel; although Chapman had read most of Lewis’s Christian theological works, he had" → "novel. Though Chapman had already read most of Lewis's Christian theological works, he had"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Should Narnia books WikiLink to the appropriate page?
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "he was impressed" → "Chapman was impressed"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "ultimately settling on "Remembering You" as" → "ultimately settling on "Remembering You", as"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "It was produced" → "The song was produced" to specify it's not the strings only
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "The song was recorded" → "It was recorded"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:34, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Composition

 * WikiLink Pop music on the mention of pop in the sample's text
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:41, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Target Beats per minute to Tempo
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:41, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "and folk influences[10] as well" → "and folk influences,[10] as well"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:41, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "prominent usage of strings throughout the song" → "prominent usage of strings throughout"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i>


 * "Chapman's recent singles" → "Chapman's previous singles" as this is dated now and in the future will be too
 * Good point, done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:41, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "or as having a Christian message" → "or having a Christian message"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:41, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * The lyrics mentioned, can you exp so it's known why like what's the meaning of them?
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:41, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "they would remember" → "the characters would remember"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:41, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Critical reception and accolades

 * Section belongs below release and promotion
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:44, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Add the fact the reviews were positive at the top
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:44, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "Russ Breimeier of Christianity Today" → "Breimeier" as you have already referenced his identity
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:44, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "praised the song as" → "praised the song for"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i>


 * "'God manifested in nature' piece"" → "'God manifested in nature' piece"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:44, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "the song as being" → "the song for being"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:44, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "and said it" → "and said that it"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:44, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "comparing it to the" → "which he compared to the"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:44, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Release and promotion

 * "The song was released to radio on August 3, 2005" → "The song was serviced to US Christian radio stations on August 3, 2005"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "and as a digital download on August 23, 2005" → "and released for digital download on August 23"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Shouldn't the performance tracks EP be referenced somewhere here?
 * It's not a major release tbh. It came several years after the single came out (2009) and these tracks are generally used in churches, if ever AFAIK. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * WikiLink EMI
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "with Walt Disney Pictures" → "with Disney"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Give the music video its own para in the section
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "An accompanying music video for" → "An accompanying music video for"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "online on the" → "online via the"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "featured scenes" → "features scenes" as it still exists
 * Good catch, done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "like the lamppost" → "including the lamppost"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "The video used" → "The visual used"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "which represents evil" → "which represent evil" as you're talking about two things
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "before appearing Christian radio" → "before appearing on Christian radio"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Add the number it initially charted at on the first chart mentioned (34)
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * All of numbers should be wrote out like "number seven" instead of "No. 7" for example, with the exception of number 22
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "It also peaked at No. 8 on the..." tedious to write chart every time; just write the names of all of the charts without calling them charts straight afterwards and end the sentence with "charts respectively"
 * Done. As a matter of convenience, I've divided them between Billboard and R&R. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * "and Christian AC Songs chart" → "and Christian AC Songs charts respectively" as you mention another chart in this sentence previously
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Track listing

 * Retitle to track listings as multiple are mentioned
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:18, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * (Credits from the album liner notes) → Credits adapted from the album liner notes
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:18, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Mention the composers and lyricists as they are cited from liner notes
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:18, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Release and radio history

 * Section belongs below charts
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:16, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Retitle to Release history
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:16, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Move Territory to the far left and retitle Country
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:16, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Give refs own column; see "Fade"
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i>


 * Radio → Christian radio
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:16, 14 July 2019 (UTC)


 * Why no mention of the EP?
 * Corrected. I've mentioned it now, and clarified the initial release as a single. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:16, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Weekly charts

 * Change to the Billboard charts being laid out in the traditional brackets format for this box like "Fade", with the WikiLink on each one per usual
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:08, 14 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Do the same for Radio & Records for consistency
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:08, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Year end charts

 * Use brackets formatting but remove WikiLinks
 * Done. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 02:08, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

 * Some issue that need fixing and I believe you can in a week or so. for now. --Kyle Peake (talk) 21:43, 13 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the prompt review, ! All issues should be resolved now. Give it another look when you can. <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Toa</i> <i style="color: green; font-family: Mistral;">Nidhiki05</i> 03:01, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

✅ for this. --Kyle Peake (talk) 03:17, 14 July 2019 (UTC)