Talk:René Descartes/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomcat7 (talk · contribs) 17:36, 2 December 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Lead does not summarize the article properly Biography sections should be completely reformatted (the German version is a good model) Why is "Religious beliefs" in this section?
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Many paragraphs are unreferenced A few questionable sources (primary mostly)
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * The lead alone tells me that the article is not neutral enough. Too many praises, etc.
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Per the above issues: Not enough in-line citations in the biography section, odd structure, questionable sources--Tomcat (7) 17:36, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Per the above issues: Not enough in-line citations in the biography section, odd structure, questionable sources--Tomcat (7) 17:36, 2 December 2012 (UTC)