Talk:Renée Van Halm

close paraphrasing
Taking text from van Halm's artist statement, like "Cultural history and how we represent and inhabit architecture are fundamental to my work. " and turning it into "Cultural history and how we represent and inhabit architecture, as well as the stuff that surrounds us are fundamental to her work". "Over the years I have looked at many subjects that reflect on art and design practices through the genres of still life and landscape as well as decor, abstraction and pattern" becomes "Over the years she has looked at many subjects that reflect on art and design practices through the genres of still life and landscape as well as decor, abstraction and pattern". This is all much to close and at a miminum needs to be attributed properly. Mduvekot (talk) 00:33, 11 September 2017 (UTC)