Talk:Repopulation of wolves in Colorado

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 Onel 5969  TT me 16:41, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

This (These) sentence(s) need reformulation
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I suggest this formulation :

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I'm guessing that if another female would have been collared in 2022, her designation would be F2204. The reformulation here is quite big, but it removes the duplicate "was designated part" and removes the confusion that could be attributed to : "was designated as XXX because she was fitted at XX date". It's not quite right.

Does it make sense ? Tagging you @Fettlemap - Gimly24 (talk) 17:10, 26 January 2023 (UTC) > Cheers, Fettlemap (talk) 19:03, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Yes with this change to avoid future tense "will"


 * Good ! Thank you ! I made the edit ! Enjoy the rest of your day :) Gimly24 (talk) 23:50, 26 January 2023 (UTC)