Talk:Report to the Commissioner

Plot
In the last paragraph I did a double take: "Lockley and the policewoman’s superior officers, determined to save their careers, scramble to come up with a story that would be minimally embarrassing to the department. They claim that Lockley, the woman and the dealer were involved in a lovers’ triangle and that Lockley shot her out of jealousy."

This doesn't seem right! It's hardly going to "save" Lockley's career. I have changed it to "Lockley's and the policewoman's superior officers". Presumably this is the intended meaning. — Preceding unsigned comment added by CatNip48 (talk • contribs) 18:57, 9 October 2021 (UTC)