Talk:Resistance (comics)

Grammar/sentence structure/irregularity problems. Please read.
Could whoever wrote this please reply and tell me what you meant on certain spaces of the page? there are some sentences that are run ons, completely unintelligible, and there are also problems with some statements made in your synopsis. One example of the latter, for instance, would be at the end of alpha team's story, where "the scars on his face from the chimeran virus are clearly visible" is put. This is talking about Capelli, and in project Abraham, it was seen that the scars on his face were from a wound from when he experienced a burst of rage and attacked his doctors.

If we could clear this all up, that would be great. Morbus Rising (talk) 18:42, 17 January 2010 (UTC)