Talk:Return of the Obra Dinn/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 06:27, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

Taking a look now....you know the drill...Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:27, 26 August 2021 (UTC)


 * If "Memento Mortem" is a foreign phrase...should it not be in italics?
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
 *  As they rowed away, three mermaids attacked the boats and killed several of the group. - the subject changes oddly here - it'd be good to align the subjects between the clauses ahd a go at this myself
 * The game also has quite the tonal shift at this time. I'm not sure how we would reword this. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)


 *  to move in a 3D space rewrite as "to move in a three dimensional space" (and link I think?)
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
 *  Pope faced preliminary issues at this stage.  - this sentence is just sorta plonked there - is a bit vague, can it be removed?
 * Sure, done. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Any subsequent games cite this as an influence?
 * I haven't come across such a thing, but wouldn't be adverse to adding this if there were games that did.Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

A nice read overall. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:40, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

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Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: - just minor quibbles really. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi Cas, thanks for the review. Do you mind giving me a couple days to have a chance to look at these points/changes? Should be less than a week. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:46, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
 * no problemo Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:39, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi Cas, I've answered all of the above, although some of the points I haven't actioned.Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Forgot the ping., I've addressed the above. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:43, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

all Good....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:33, 3 September 2021 (UTC)