Talk:Revelation (short story)

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IP User:173.72.92.95 added the following text to the article: "Interestingly, the summary neglects to mention that the characters in the waiting room also share at great length their intensely racist views, mocking black people, calling them all sorts of names, using the N word. The daughter, home from the summer form college up north, is the only character who does not laugh at the ugly racist jokes and insults". This may be a useful thing to add, but needs to be done so more smoothly. I'm placing it here for consideration. Lady of  Shalott  16:18, 9 July 2011 (UTC)