Talk:Revenge of the Mummy (Universal Studios Hollywood)/GA1

GA Review
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As per previous GA reviews, this one is going to fail basically because of the paucity of references. There's too much to do to put it on hold. But briefly other work includes
 * Numerals less than ten should be spelled out in full
 * Section headings shouldn't include "the" and should follow normal rules for capitals per WP:MOS.
 * I would also suggest a severe copy edit. For example, the word coaster is used six times in the lead.
 * Lead has three pars. Doesn't meet WP:LEAD. Peanut4 (talk) 23:59, 18 August 2008 (UTC)