Talk:Revolutionary Girl Utena/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) 19:55, 23 February 2023 (UTC)

I'm gonna review this. Stay tuned.TeenAngels1234 (talk) 19:55, 23 February 2023 (UTC) That's all for now. Good work.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 09:38, 25 February 2023 (UTC)
 * It's not stringent for the purpose of promotion, but can't the two articles be created for Hasegawa and Oguro? Even a few lines would be fine. They are definitely encyclopedic because they have participated in and written successful and relevant works beyond Utena.
 * I'll look into seeing if I can't make at least stub articles for them both.
 * I would suggest adding a summary of the Reception section in the lead.
 * Done.
 * I know what gyaru are, but can you make it more explicit by explaining it?
 * I'm not sure how to best approach this one. I don't think gyaru in this context requires any more explanation than "a boisterous woman", but that just seems repetitious with the context the quote already gives.
 * I would suggest explaining who said "influenced by idiosyncrasies."
 * Done
 * I would avoid explicit references to other sections, such as "See Soundtrack and music below."
 * Done.
 * "Saito ultimately expressed an affirmative position on how the series presented the relationship between the characters." Can you explain further? I'm not sure I understand.
 * That she ultimately has spoken positively of the decision to depict them as a couple; I've rephrased the section.
 * Soukatsu shite. Can you add the Japanese text with the Nihongo template and translation?
 * Done.
 * Hi, response above. Morgan695 (talk) 19:24, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

Okay. Then: That's all I can find. The rest seems to me to be not only from GA, but perhaps also from FA. As a long-time Utena fan somewhat upset by the anime's poor recognition on Wikipedia and elsewhere, I am pleased. Great job.TeenAngels1234 (talk) 20:43, 25 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Perhaps capitalization for "for western audiences" would be better?
 * Done.
 * Perhaps "Animerica described" is better than "Animerica characterized."
 * Done.
 * "patcicipating." Probably a typo.
 * Done.
 * Ikuhara's comment in Reception seems superfluous to me.
 * I disagree; a creator specifically acknowledging that a series continues to have a following two decades-plus after its release specifically because of its LGBT fans feels relevant to a section on its impact and legacy.
 * I would suggest moving the content regarding Evangelion to the Themes section, perhaps creating a separate subsection.
 * Giving it its own section under Themes feels like it would be WP:UNDUE to me, but I'm not sure the paragraph makes sense anywhere other than under Reception.
 * Hi, response above. Morgan695 (talk) 01:19, 26 February 2023 (UTC)


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 * A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
 * B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
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 * It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
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 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
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 * Brief summa. The entire article is verifiable and full of reliable sources. The prose is excellent, like an AF. Exposition practically flawless. Editing was timely and appropriate. Great job.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 17:55, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Brief summa. The entire article is verifiable and full of reliable sources. The prose is excellent, like an AF. Exposition practically flawless. Editing was timely and appropriate. Great job.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 17:55, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Brief summa. The entire article is verifiable and full of reliable sources. The prose is excellent, like an AF. Exposition practically flawless. Editing was timely and appropriate. Great job.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 17:55, 26 February 2023 (UTC)