Talk:Revolutions per Minute (Rise Against album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jennica (talk · contribs) 12:20, 28 November 2016 (UTC)

Comments by Jennica

 * I changed "Credits" to "Personnel" per WP:MOSALBUM and changed "Recorded" to "Studio" in the infobox. Changed the semicolons to bold in Personnel [for screenreader user preferences], changed all "functions" in the personnel to lowercase. I don't really know if that Personnel section needs a div col per se. The formatting for the rest of the article is fine. That's all I have--Jennica ✿ / talk 12:20, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Wow, thanks! That was a quick and painless review. Famous Hobo (talk) 15:30, 28 November 2016 (UTC)


 * Debating whether or not this line should be in the lead, " They chose Bill Stevenson and Jason Livermore to produce the album, with whom they developed a strong partnership. Recording took place from November to December 2002 at The Blasting Room in Fort Collins, Colorado." - since the information is available in the "Backgrou≈nd and recording" section, the infobox and Personnel. Also, did the album chart? If so, a chart should be made. --Jennica ✿ / talk 00:18, 29 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Personally, I think it's important to have those two lines in the lead, as it gives the read a time period of when the events took place, and who were the major contributors to the album. But that's just my personal opinion, I can remove the part about the strong partnership. And while the album did chart, it only reached the Independent Albums chart. The position is mentioned in the release section, and while I do understand that it's common practice to have a charts section, I don't see the point in having an entire section dedicated to one minor chart that has already been discussed previously in the article. However, I also have no opposition to adding the chart section. Famous Hobo (talk) 08:02, 29 November 2016 (UTC)