Talk:Rey Bucanero/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:32, 11 August 2016 (UTC)

Going to take on this review. Will be up tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 19:32, 11 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate

use]] with suitable captions)'':
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
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Personal life

 * "Arturo García Ortiz was born on July 19, 1974 Mexico City, Distrito Federal" - This sentence is missing the word "in" which needs to go in between "1974" and "Mexico City"
 * "in ring" should have the hyphen for consistency
 * "all of whom inspired him to become a wrestler and had a hand in training García for his in ring career." - it would better flow as all of who inspired him to become a wrestler and trained García for his in ring career.

Professional wrestling career

 * "Records are unclear if there was a wrestler known as "Rey Bucanero" already or if the name referred to "Pirata Morgan"?" - the words in bold should be replaced with another wrestler known as "Rey Bucanero" and remove the question mark
 * "He worked as "Rey Bucanero Jr." from 1991 through 1994, working primarily smaller shows in Puebla, Puebla" - reptition of the word worked/working - replace one of the two with another suitable word. Also Pubela, Pubela should be Pubela City
 * "The first indication that CMLL had faith in the Rey Bucanero character came in 1996 where CMLL teamed him up with Emilio Charles Jr. for the 1996 Gran Alternativa tournament," - repititon of CMLL, replace the second instance it is mentioned with the promotion

Los Infernales

 * "In 1999 El Satánico reformed the group Los Infernales, recruiting Último Guerrero and Rey Bucanero," - replace the second comma with a semi-colon
 * "it's" - the apostrophe is not needed

Los Guerreros del Infierno

 * "November 2. 2011" - the full stop must be replaced with a comma, and do you mean 2001?
 * " three time" - this needs a hyphen between the two words
 * "it was teased that Bucanero would break up with Guerrero but Bucanero stayed and Los Guerreros feuded with Perro Aguayo, Jr.'s Los Perros del Mal faction into 2006." - The parts highlighted in bold lettering must be unitalised
 * "At the end of April, he teamed with Tarzan Boy to win a double hair vs. hair match against Mr. Águila and Damián 666 in the main event of the 50. Aniversario de Arena México show." - All the text not bolded should be unitalised

TRT / TGR

 * "forcing REy Bucanero" - remove REy
 * "Bucanero and Terrible kicked Tiger out of La Fuerza TRT" - kicked out is unencycopedic language. How about Bucanero and Terrible removed Tiger out of the La Fuerza TRT squad