Talk:Rhodesia at the 1928 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Dingo (talk · contribs) 11:21, 16 October 2016 (UTC)

Taking, will review soon. — Yellow Dingo&#160;(talk) 11:21, 16 October 2016 (UTC)

1a

 * Per MOS:TITLEABSENTBOLD unbold "Southern Rhodesia" and "1928 Summer Olympics"
 * "were allowed by the International Olympic Committee to" → "were allowed, by the International Olympic Committee, to"
 * When mentioning Malta, link to Malta at the 1928 Summer Olympics not Malta at the Olympics
 * "received by bye" → "received a bye"

Overall
Short but good article. Putting on hold for now. — Yellow Dingo&#160;(talk) 05:45, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing - I hadn't realised about the bolding; I'm going to go back to the other articles I've recently taken to GA and de-bold those too. Miyagawa (talk) 09:38, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
 * I should have also said - I've made those changes you suggested! :) Miyagawa (talk) 09:38, 17 October 2016 (UTC)


 * Ok looks good. I'm happy to pass this article. Well done! — Yellow Dingo&#160;<b style="color:BLUE">(talk)</b> 09:42, 17 October 2016 (UTC)