Talk:Rhythm Inside (Loïc Nottet song)/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:53, 14 October 2018 (UTC)

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 15:53, 14 October 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "Previously, Nottet had participated in native singing competition The Voice Belgique in 2014" - in his
 * "for his Selfocracy Tour (2017-2018)." - en dash is needed in place of the hyphen

Background and composition

 * "Belgian singer Loïc Nottet rose to fame after finishing second in native singing competition The Voice Belgique in 2014," - became prominent after finishing second in his native
 * "Another editor of Wiwibloggs pointed out" - mentioned

Critical reception and accolades

 * "Music critics received "Rhythm Inside" with positive responses." - positively received "Rhythm Inside".

Music videos

 * "although it had been since deleted." - has
 * "the clip was first broadcast on Belgian television La Une." - television channel
 * "According to Chris Haplin of Wiwibloggs, the clip "focuses on opposites and fighting conceptions, with shots including two young girls: one a beauty queen, the other playing with dinosaurs" - needs to be sourced
 * "the woman awakens again and proceeds into leaving the building." - to leave the building.
 * "she finds a clock on one tree" - on a tree

In Vienna

 * "They occasionally perform choreography in form" - in the form
 * "Michael Cragg pointed out that Nottet" - drew attention
 * Italise The Guardian as it is a print publication

Points awarded to Belgium

 * Remove the link to the word "Netherlands" since its already linked in the previous sub-section