Talk:Ri Chol

Wording
I found some of the sentences a bit long and awkward — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2404:4408:2361:D100:987A:1B4A:ACA0:1F44 (talk) 00:30, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
 * who added the text. – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 06:44, 7 November 2020 (UTC)