Talk:Ribs (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 09:01, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * The song was released as a → replace "The song" with "It" to avoid repetation
 * Written by Lorde and Joel Little and produced by Little, with additional production from Lorde → Written and produced by Joel Little and Lorde,
 * The track appeared → Commercially, the track appeared

Infobox

 * Flawless ;)

Production and release

 * and mixing handled by Little → and mixing handled by the latter
 * was issued as a free → the "free" part isn't sourced by the reference, so I think it's the best to just leave it as "a promotional single"
 * via iTunes Stores → via iTunes Stores by Universal Music (UMG).

Composition

 * she references the Broken Social Scene → she references Canadian indie rock band Broken Social Scene's song
 * Release year for "Lover's Split" in brackets

Live performances

 * Lorde performed the song on 7 September → The singer also appeared on 7 September
 * in Los Angeles, California.[15] On 3 October 2013, Lorde held a concert at the Warsaw in Brooklyn and performed the song among other tracks from the album. → in Los Angeles, California,[15] while also singing it a concert at the Warsaw in Brooklyn on 3 October 2013 alongside other material from the album
 * Lorde performed this song at the Coachella Valley Music Festival → Lorde performed this version at the Coachella Valley Music Festival
 * and also performed it at Manchester for her → and also used it for a Manchester gig during her
 * You need to reference her appearance at the Coachella Valley Music Festival and the song's usage on her Melodrama Tour
 * In the lead you say she performed the song on her debut concert tour, but it is not clear which one it is. Can you specify it here

Reception

 * Move this section before "Live performances"
 * You need to open the section with something like: Upon its release, "Ribs" received favorable reviews from music critics.
 * particularly lyrically → I think that this is superfluous, as you say "Lorde had written"; how could she else praise Lorde's writing skills than lyrically?!
 * Combine both paragraphs
 * "Ribs" peaked at numbers → Commercially, "Ribs" peaked at numbers
 * and UK streaming charts respectively → and British streaming charts, respectively
 * reached number twenty-nine → reached number 29
 * single also charted on the → single further reached number 26 on the

Track listing

 * Flawless ;)

Charts

 * Some Wikipedia policy wants Chart "(2013–14)" to be Chart "(2013–2014)"

Copy-violation

 * 8.3% is very good!

Outcome

 * This article does need some work, but I think you can handle it ! Good luck; Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:09, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Added in a lot more information to make it balanced and informative. Thank you! De88 (talk) 07:22, 3 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:39, 3 January 2018 (UTC)