Talk:Ricardio the Heart Guy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 23:58, 2 December 2013 (UTC)

I shall review this, hopefully within the next few days. Thanks,  Ruby  2010/  2013  23:58, 2 December 2013 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay with this. Please see my comments below (all very minor).


 * Comments
 * What does "a literal heart" mean? I think I got an idea of it from the plot section, but it could be reworded slightly in the lead for clarity.
 * I removed since I think it's kind of redundant.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   16:54, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
 * I'd provide a wikilink to Storyboard
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   16:54, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't see anything about storyboarding in the production section, but perhaps I'm missing something? I admittedly don't know a whole lot about animation.
 * Added.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   16:54, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Perhaps mention that the DVD featured audio commentary on the episode?
 * Speaking of that, is there anything else you can pull from the commentary? A few sentences doesn't seem like much.
 * Yeah, sadly, that's all there was. I was kinda disappointed in the commentary for this episode, since it was mostly the cast and crew cracking jokes the whole time.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   16:54, 23 December 2013 (UTC)

As I said, not too many issues here. Will place the review on hold for now while my comments get resolved. Thanks,  Ruby  2010/  2013  03:38, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
 * How's that look?-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   16:54, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Much better. No sourcing issues, and the article is well-written and comprehensive. Happy to pass this one.  Ruby  2010/  2013  17:47, 23 December 2013 (UTC)