Talk:Richard Barrons

Incentivise
Too bad to see "incentivise" on the Main Page of Wikipedia.--Wetman (talk) 21:09, 22 February 2011 (UTC)

A couple of suggestions
Per the request at WP:MHA, I have a couple of suggestions:
 * do we know his date of birth and where he was educated in his youth? If so, it should probably be added;
 * the Personal Life section header is incorrectly capitalised - it should just be "Personal life";
 * I'm not sure about including the bit about marriage and children in the lead. It is probably not necessary, but that is just my opinion ;
 * Citation # 23 is currently just a bare url, it should probably be formatted like the others for consistency;

Anyway, good work so far. Cheers, AustralianRupert (talk) 00:00, 23 February 2011 (UTC)