Talk:Richard III (1699 play)

Rewrite needed
The language in this page is unnecessarily long-winded and at times quite unclear, although not incorrect (mostly). In my opinion, it needs an editor's competent care. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mcicogni (talk • contribs) 15:41, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

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This page needs a comprehensive rewrite very badly. The English is completely unclear. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Melanion (talk • contribs) 03:27, 29 June 2007 (UTC)