Talk:Richard Madden/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:30, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have for now, so it's on hold. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 14:27, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Opening sentence is a little short, could be expanded to say what kind of actor perhaps?
 * ✅. KyleJoan talk
 * "debut as a child actor and stage debut " not keen on the quick repetition of debut.
 * I replaced stage debut with later began performing on stage. KyleJoan talk  06:23, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "his shyness.[8][6] " ref order.
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 * "Iain Banks's Complicity.[9] which was released in 2000,[10]" punctuation fail.
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 * "Royal Conservatoire of Scotland," you referred to it by its other name in the lead.
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 * "While at the Royal Conservatoire ..." this sentence is confusing and has too many run-on clauses.
 * I think I fixed it. I split the information into two separate sentences. KyleJoan talk  06:23, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Citizens' Theatre our article has no apostrophe.
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 * "Worried About the Boy " small the.
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 * Banks's vs Mendes'...
 * ✅. I went with Banks' and Mendes'. KyleJoan talk
 * "recognized" British English -> recognised.
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 * No need to link London or Los Angeles, they are well known.
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 * "Citizen's Theatre" another variant not the same as our own article.
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 * Be Near Me so good it got referenced twice.
 * Ha! Sorry about that! ✅. KyleJoan talk
 * Check online refs have accessdates/publication dates/both where appropriate.
 * ✅ per this edit. KyleJoan talk  06:23, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Be consistent with linking things like The Guardian in the refs. Either always, never or just once on the first instance.  I prefer always.
 * ✅ per this edit. I agree with preferring to always link, so I added links to all of the refs. KyleJoan talk
 * Spaced hyphens in the ref titles should be en-dashes.
 * ✅. KyleJoan talk
 * I believe I made all of the suggested changes, . Please let me know if there are any others you would like made. Thank you very much! KyleJoan talk  06:23, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * thanks for all those updates. Just one more thing: while I very much appreciate the accessibility applied to the tables, I think the row scopes should be on the film/television series/etc rather than the year?  It's not essential and not part of GA criteria so I'm passing this anyway, just if you could find time to move those scopes it would be brilliant.  Good work.  The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 08:01, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅. Thank you very much again, ! KyleJoan talk  13:19, 4 April 2020 (UTC)