Talk:Richard Orsini/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 21:22, 5 February 2023 (UTC)

Will take on all three related articles. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  21:22, 5 February 2023 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅
 * Passes spot checks   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

 * Recommend expanding the lede with details of his military campaign and death, but I think it still satisfies lede coverage as is.

Family

 * his first wife is unknown perhaps the identity of his first wife is unknown
 * That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  21:41, 5 February 2023 (UTC)