Talk:Richard Phillips (merchant mariner)

A note
A section about the lawsuit and controversy should be added to this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.51.48.58 (talk) 07:57, 3 December 2013 (UTC)

Refs
The references have a very weird format style (in text editor) - they should be fixed to be included in standard form. --MrScorch6200 (t c) 06:16, 26 January 2014 (UTC)

The entire section summarizing the pirate hijacking and subsequent hostage negotiation is either poorly written, or is a series of cut and pasted sentences from a different piece attempting a condensed summary. It jumps all over the place, starting out with the pirates on board the Maersk, followed by the Maersk leaving port headed for Mumbasa with this much cargo etc. Then flash to the pirate boat was sunk after the pirates were on board. What?? Later it's talking about the four pirates, then how the snipers killed all three pirates (All??), then out of nowhere giving the names of three of the pirates, then it reveals one pirate was taken into custody aboard the naval ship (how'd he get there?) It's discombobulated, and needs serious revision. -Paul 96.41.88.23 (talk) 22:25, 16 March 2014 (UTC)