Talk:Richmond Hill station (LIRR)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 19:23, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Opening statement
Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  19:23, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Now for ruin – ♠Vami _IV†♠  19:24, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Prose

 * To quote editor, the lead should discuss the history in brief.
 * ✅ I have done these. epicgenius (talk) 18:36, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * the station became a hotbed for the homeless along with animals, and an illegal waste dumping site.[12][13][15][16][17][18] This does not need six citations.
 * east to Lefferts Avenue.[6][8][9][10] [...] The area has been used as parking space in the past.[12][13][15][16] Nor these four.
 * east to Lefferts Avenue.[6][8][9][10] [...] The area has been used as parking space in the past.[12][13][15][16] Nor these four.