Talk:Rick Bergman

COI edit requests
Hi, I work for a communications firm that represents Synaptics and I'd like to suggest several updates to this article:
 * Infobox: removing the  parameter and replacing with:


 * Removing unsourced  from lead.
 * Removing last two sentences from lead ("He had been a longtime executive in the graphics chip business, serving in many positions at ATI Technologies before it was acquired in 2006 by AMD. In May 2015, he was appointed to Maxwell Technologies board of directors.") to keep lead concise.
 * Renaming "Education" section to "Education and personal life".
 * Replacing first citation in "Education and personal life" section with a secondary source rather than a primary one:
 * Adding to end of "Education and personal life" section:
 * Combining "Early career", "At AMD" and "Awards" sections into single "Career" section. Adding information (including info bumped from the lead) and secondary sources, particularly to replace primary sources:


 * Removing "Media coverage" section as non-notable.

For reference, all these proposed edits are mocked up in my sandbox. Due to my COI, I won't be editing this page directly, so I'd greatly appreciate any help or feedback. Thank you! Mary Gaulke (talk) 21:11, 28 March 2017 (UTC)


 * ✅, for the most part. I've made a few minor changes, most notably, vetoing the contents of the "awards" section. I'm not a fan of including awards that haven't demonstrated their significance, particularly when they require an entry fee to participate. Altamel (talk) 03:29, 4 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Much obliged, thank you! Mary Gaulke (talk) 15:08, 4 May 2017 (UTC)