Talk:Rick Rypien/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: User: (talk · contribs) 19:08, 13 February 2018 (UTC)

Initial Review
This article is well-constructed overall, and possess an immense amount of detail in regards to a player who was not exactly a household name. I did notice a few grammatical errors, and some very minor details that were missed, for example, in the image box showing the jerseys of Wilkins, Rypien, and Demitra, it is indicated that Wilkins's jersey is on the left, however the reader is left to to determine on their own where Demitra's is. (As I said this is very minor, as his name is on the sweater, after all). With this in mind, I am still happy to pass this article, and I must add, well done. Fhsig13 (talk) 19:08, 13 February 2018 (UTC)