Talk:Ricky Balshaw

Suggested improvements
The grammar and narrative could be tightened to make for a more encyclopaedic format, it appears to have been partly lifted from an article. I have already made some minor condensations, deleting a few repetitions, as well as updating the reference to the 2016 Olympics and his current employment outside sport, cited to a Shropshire Star news report.Cloptonson (talk) 21:21, 16 September 2016 (UTC)