Talk:Ride (Lana Del Rey song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 21:45, 21 December 2012 (UTC)

Review
The prose needs work. I found several non-compliant prose issues through the article, and here are a few examples only from the composition section:
 * Prose comments
 * "composed in the indie pop, soul pop, and baroque pop genres"
 * "Del Rey sings lines such as,"
 * "The song opens with an audible inhalation"
 * "before Del Rey gushes out,"
 * "The recording features mild cursing, but is otherwise laced"

References look good overall, but they need polish to be at a full standard.
 * Reference comments

I am afraid that this article is not complete. It misses a commercial performance section that can be perfectly created, as well as other information, such as how the song came into existence, the relation between this song, the EP it belongs to, and her previous work.
 * Coverage comments

For these reasons, I'd have to fail the article: it fails 1(a) and possibly 1(b), as well as, in some sort, 3(a). Regards. — ΛΧΣ  21  22:07, 21 December 2012 (UTC)