Talk:Riegelmann Boardwalk/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:06, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. I'm somewhat surprised how long this one has been waiting given its excellent condition already! On hold. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 14:32, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "The modified-chevron..." no need for the hyphen.
 * "20 feet.[9][3][4] " convert and reorder refs.
 * "the piles.[10][4]" order again.
 * Is there a link for Tuscan column?
 * "Comfort stations" this is euphemism for toilets?
 * " 6 a.m. to 9 p.m. each day, except during summers when cycling is curtailed after 10 a.m" non-breaking spaces between hours and am/pm.
 * "Original "Fifth Avenue" style " reuse the hyphen from the above caption here, thus "Original "Fifth Avenue"-style "
 * "minor-league" is this hyphen needed? Isn't minor league baseball a thing?
 * "original Luna Park" perhaps put "original" into the link to clearly distinguish between both "Luna Park" links.
 * "Boardwalk.[21][18]" ref order.
 * "listing.[25][24] " ditto.
 * Link "carousel" (you link rollercoaster so....)
 * "F.J. Kelly" space between F & J.
 * Check for overlinking on the names of the attractions (Luna Park etc)
 * "New York City.<[59] " spare <
 * I see the caption "A "comfort station" along " puts comfort station in quotes...
 * " cost $20 million" inflate?
 * "with sand.[139][135]" order.
 * No need to link hot dog.
 * "The First Symphony of the Sea" if this is the name of a piece of art, shouldn't it be in italics?
 * "as well as in albums such" do you mean it is mentioned in such albums?
 * "as well as in albums such" order.
 * Ref 17, spaced hyphen should be an en-dash.
 * , thanks for the review. I have now fixed all of these. Comfort stations - yes, they are restrooms. epicgenius (talk) 15:38, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Marvellous, promoting. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 07:32, 3 April 2020 (UTC)