Talk:Rifle Falls State Park

Use of Florid Promotion
This article has a good start, but there is a promotional note to it that's almost florid in its descriptions. For example, it uses the word lovely twice, which is what you'd use when you're trying to sell a piece of land to a buyer, not a factual description of the park. Likewise the trails are an "easy walk," etc. So while it may not require a total rewrite, it would help to have someone familiar with the subject pare back the promotional feel and put it on a simple, encyclopedic level. -- Srwalden (talk) 07:48, 16 February 2023 (UTC)