Talk:Right Thoughts, Right Words, Right Action/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:34, 9 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Comments below:
 * Citations in the lead and the infobox are unnecessary.
 * ❌ - I left in the citations for the genres. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
 * It is unnecessary to put citations like this: The sun is hot. The sun is not on fire.
 * ✅ - Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Too many short paragraphs in the "Singles" section.
 * ✅ - Fixed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Twitter is largely considered unreliable.
 * ✅ - Twitter sources removed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
 * On that point, the notes require a citation.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 14:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅ - Citations have been added for the notes. Aria1561 (talk) 14:28, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Expand the contraction "can't".
 * Further explanation needed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
 * It would be nice if you added an image of the cover of the album under fair use.
 * I believe the cover already has a fair use rationale within the image's "Summary" section. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Two dead links to the "Gaon" and the "Spotify" websites
 * ✅ Gaon chart dead links fixed. The Spotify ref doesn't contain a dead link. It just requires you to sign in to the Spotify service. It should bring you to the album's streaming page once done. Aria1561 (talk) 13:14, 10 August 2015 (UTC)


 * All for now.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 21:34, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Passing, well done.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 14:51, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for reviewing this. :) Aria1561 (talk) 15:37, 10 August 2015 (UTC)