Talk:Riki Hoeata

NPOV
My main concerns with this article is it uses puffery and weasel words. My main points of contention are:
 * "impressive showing"
 * "sour note"
 * "found guilty" - is there a better way of putting this? I'm not familiar enough with rugby terminology. Perhaps this is innocuous, in which case strike this point.

All of these, if such is available, should be replaced with quotations or simply removed. Thanks, TheOneSean &#124; Talk to me 01:33, 7 May 2013 (UTC)

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