Talk:Riley L. Pitts

Reorganized sections
I have reorganized the sections according to Guide to layout ... I'll leave it to you to replace all the bolded Captain Pitts mentions with just his unbolded last name per Manual of Style (biographies) ... please see some of the other articles linked to List of African American Medal of Honor recipients for examples of how this article should look. &mdash; 17:52, 13 January 2007 (UTC)

Link for Presidential Speech
http://www.aavw.org/served/cmoh_pitts_abstract07.html - TurboManiacal 13:38, 14 January 2007 (UTC)

Biography
The biography section needs to be reworked or partially gutted. A good portion of it is just a slightly reworded excerpt from the MoH citation below it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Kevin W. (talk • contribs) 18:41, 7 September 2007


 * Thank you for your suggestion! When you feel an article needs improvement, please feel free to make those changes. Wikipedia is a wiki, so anyone can edit almost any article by simply following the  link at the top. You don't even need to log in (although there are many reasons why you might want to).  The Wikipedia community encourages you to be bold in updating pages. Don't worry too much about making honest mistakes — they're likely to be found and corrected quickly. If you're not sure how editing works, check out how to edit a page, or use the sandbox to try out your editing skills.  New contributors are always welcome. &mdash; 22:16, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I know how to edit. I've been a Wikier for a long time. However, I'd like some suggestions as to how to change the page instead of just doing it myself. --Kevin W. 22:36, 7 September 2007 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Kevin W. (talk • contribs)