Talk:Rina Aiuchi

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Very many phrases here are not even close to neutral, and the writing is poor. MadJack 03:35, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

It appears the non-neutral part was loosely translated from Aiuchi-san's official web site's biography section. I've reworded/retranslated it and checked how the Japanese Wikipedia entry is for Aiuchi, and I hope the changes are enough for this for be a neutral article. The article itself still need a lot of work done, but this should at least be a good start for it. I won't remove the neutrality dispute message myself, unless 1) I improve the article further and 2) no one else remove it before me. If there are still pieces of non-neutral which need to be addressed, and you don't know enough about Rina Aiuchi to address them yourselve, please mention them here and I'll take care of it. --Lesoria 17:56, 1 April 2006 (UTC)