Talk:Ring Off (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 17:10, 1 June 2015 (UTC)


 * A midtempo reggae-tinged ballad which is --> A midtempo reggae-tinged ballad, which is
 * Why? I don't understand this. Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * on November 24, 2014 containing a disc on the --> on November 24, 2014, containing a disc on the
 * Done Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Wikilink "7/11" the first time
 * Done Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * My main qualm about the composition section is there is no info about the writing/producing/recording team behind the song, which is easily available from the booklet
 * Done Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Lyrically, "Ring Off" addresses the end of a marriage between Beyoncé's parents. --> Lyrically, the song addresses the end of a marriage between Beyoncé's parents.
 * Done Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * At a part of the song, --> Please mentione where, the beginning, the bridge? the intermediate verses?
 * Done Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * as a hybrid of "XO" and "Caribbean vibes" of "Standing on the Sun" and "Grown Woman" --> This is not clear, we need to have what is the hybrid consisting off? Like what elements of "XO" is hybrid with SOTS and GW
 * Done Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Beyoncé's previous titles "Schoolin' Life" (2011) and "XO" (2013) --> Titles is an incorrect usage, refers to Yonka being called with those names, while they are actually song names, please change
 * Done Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * However, Zoladz complimented on the song's lyrics, calling the song "one of the most candidly personal songs Beyoncé’s ever released. --> repetition of "song"
 * Done Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * It appeared on the French SNEP Singles Chart at number 110 --> Start with "Ring Off" appeared on the French SNEP Singles Chart at number 110
 * Done Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * The song also peaked at number 5 on the Bubbling Under Hot 100 chart, a chart which acts as a 25-song extension to the Hot 100 ---> Very lame, please change it to "The song also peaked at number 5 on the US Bubbling Under Hot 100, a chart which acts as a 25-song extension to the Billboard Hot 100".
 * Done Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Why not merge the references from those of the singlechart template from the Charts section? Why use separate reference at all in the chart performance for Lescharts, Dutchcharts?
 * It is already merged I think. Simon (talk) 08:48, 3 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I corrected it. — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat ] 13:30, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

Overall ok job, on hold for seven days. — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat ] 08:22, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Passing it now, good job Simon. — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat ] 13:30, 3 June 2015 (UTC)