Talk:Risk It All (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 16:46, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

Happy to review this article. I'd be elated if you could reciprocate my GAN for This Love (Taylor Swift song). Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 16:46, 24 May 2022 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Introduce who Gospel House Choir are (are they a group, band, or collective etc.?)


 * "Described as an uplifting euphoric dance and pop song" Described by critics


 * "the lyrics of "Risk It All" " grammar; inconsistent subject


 * Infobox looks good, but I'd consider including only one external link for Music video

Background and composition

 * You can introduce Ella Henderson again because this is the first instance in prose


 * "Henderson suffered crippling anxiety" suffered from? Plus "crippling" is informal language


 * "introduced Henderson to the House Gospel Choir.[4] The London-based vocal group" introduced Henderson to the London-based vocal group House Gospel Choir. They ...

Reception

 * Avoid one-sentence paragraphs.

Promotion

 * Good.

Music videos

 * Good.

Track listing

 * Good.

Personnel

 * Inconsistent use of en-dashes and hyphens. Please use en-dashes throughout.

Chart

 * Good.

Release history

 * Good.

Verdict

 * Article needs to address some issues but is overall of good quality. Putting this on hold for seven days. Please ping me once everything is completed. Ippantekina (talk) 16:46, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
 * ≫  Lil- Unique1  -{ Talk  }- 19:53, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Happy to promote this. Well done! Ippantekina (talk) 04:12, 25 May 2022 (UTC)