Talk:Ritual (Tiësto, Jonas Blue and Rita Ora song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:50, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 09:50, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Should dance really be included as a genre in the infobox if dance-pop is already?
 * Wouldn't "in various countries" be more appropriate right after the formats?
 * "it was met with a warm reception" → "the song received a warm reception"
 * "the music of the song and" → "the music of it and"
 * "including in Canada, Norway," → "including Canada, Norway,"
 * Poland should come before the certification body in that sentence
 * Pipe neon light to Neon lighting

Background and composition

 * "Few days prior its release," → "A few days prior its release,"
 * Mention in the release sentence that it was for digital download and streaming in various countries
 * The duration is not sourced
 * Again, should dance be mentioned as a genre if dance-pop already is?

Reception

 * Maybe merge this with the below section and retitle to Reception and promotion per that being only one para?
 * "to blend "driving instrumentals [...]" → "to blend a "driving instrumental [...]"
 * "ready to dance."" → "ready to dance"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "kickstart the weekend" → "kickstart your weekend" per the source's wording
 * "foresaw it "to reign supreme in clubs" → "foresaw it as "destined to rule clubs" per above
 * "it peaked at number 13" → "the song peaked at number 13"

Music video

 * Pipe neon lights to Neon lighting
 * "Ora's appearance, stating that "she's" → "Ora's appearance, stating: "She's"

Track listing

 * Should acoustic really be capitalised?

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; that went smoothly as expected! --K. Peake 11:01, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Hey long time no see :D. Everything was addressed and thanks for the review! Iaof2017 (talk) 15:02, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
 * @Iaof2017 ✅ now, however can you edit the talk page since I'm not able to on mobile? K. Peake 17:35, 17 February 2023 (UTC)