Talk:River Islands at Lathrop

Deletion
please dont delte River Islands at Lathrop im still new at this i need help i went back and took off things i copy please save the page. (Kendwallace (talk) 03:46, 13 October 2009 (UTC))
 * See discussion at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Kendwallace#Speedy_deletion_nomination_of_River_Islands_at_Lathrop. GeorgeLouis (talk) 05:04, 13 October 2009 (UTC)

Rewrite of article
It appears that user Kendwallace has rewritten the article and put it into his own words. This is still plagiarism but may not be a copyvio. I am in correspondence with the user elsewhere. Sincerely, GeorgeLouis (talk) 23:20, 13 October 2009 (UTC)

GeorgeLouis if still plagiarism then i will write  brand new article then put on talk page. (Kendwallace (talk) 15:34, 14 October 2009 (UTC)).

Copyright violation
A review of the article indicates it was created by substantial amounts of copy-pasting from multiple sources -- and without attribution. Although there has been some attempts to alter the text, it has not been enough to avoid plagiarism. (See Close paraphrasing for information). There are many instances of direct copying. For example, the article states: "River Islands developers have fattened up 900 acres of the original San Joaquin River levee from a slim 20 feet wide to a minimum of 150 feet wide. Eventually, all 18 miles of the levees surrounding the housing project will be beefed up to 300 feet wide." The source states: "developers have fattened up 900 acres of the original San Joaquin River levee from a slim 20 feet wide to a minimum of 150 feet wide. Eventually, all 18 miles of the levees surrounding the housing project will be beefed up to 300 feet wide." Article states: "When the students from River Island reaches 81 students, the students will move to a middle school in River Islands, and when there are 430 high school students, construction will begin on the permanent high school" The source states: "When the school reaches 81 students, the students will move to a middle school in River Islands, and when there are 430 high school students, construction will begin on a permanent high school." There are also POV phrases lifted from sources, such as ... will commence development as the economy recovers is copied from here, other civic necessities and plenty of other amenities is taken from here, and River Islands will be pedestrian-friendly, diverse, social, civic and commercial hub that will provide services, amenities and entertainment to it citizens is copied from the company website. Given the extensive copy-pasting at the creation of the article and the remaining issues of close paraphrasing, the prudent option in cases like this is to start from scratch. I've deleted the copyvio text and rewritten the intro as a stub with a some references. The rest of the article should be reconstructed in original language. — Cactus Writer |   needles  12:18, 21 October 2009 (UTC)

Update
the community is planned to break ground in 2014 according to website please dont make any changes and a school is planned to come before any homes will be built. thank you (Koko345 (talk) 16:21, 29 August 2011 (UTC))


 * These are merely proposals, not signed contracts. Binksternet (talk) 18:28, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

Binksternet, that true well thanks for making the changes are u one over this page? Koko345 —Preceding undated comment added 20:38, 29 August 2011 (UTC).