Talk:River Works station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:02, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:25, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "to General Electric Aviation employees" isn't the company called "GE Aviation"?
 * "MassDOT, " expand before using this.
 * Lynn station is linked, but nothing for West Lynn?
 * I'm not sure what you mean by this. Where?
 * "freight sidings" link?
 * "grade crossing" link?
 * "in 1837. By 1852" bit repetitive.
 * ✅ Reworded.
 * You have several bold names, like G.E. Works but they don't all exist as redirects back to this article.
 * ✅ Redirects created.
 * "Boston, Revere Beach & Lynn Railroad" it was "and" in the lead.
 * "railroad.[21][14]:77 " order.
 * "The River Works plant" overlinked.
 * "1952.[30][23][31]" order.
 * "timetables.[34][35][36][37] " likewise.
 * Those appear to already be in order.
 * "seven daily inbound boardings in 1983, and 27 in 2018" 7/27 or seven/twenty-seven.
 * Is that reference really page 0?
 * It's the inside front cover, what would be page 0 given the existing pagination. I can't think of a better way to indicate that with rp.
 * "schedules based on existing Saturday schedules were in effect from March 16 to June 23, 2020, due to the COVID-19 pandemic. These schedules" schedules/schedules/schedules...
 * ✅ Reworded.
 * "July 1, 2020–June 30, 2021" spaced en-dash.
 * "made accessible, with"
 * Not sure what change you're suggesting here.
 * "with MassDOT in" again, spell it out.
 * Ref 46 could use an endash not a hyphen.
 * Is that reference really page 0?
 * It's the inside front cover, what would be page 0 given the existing pagination. I can't think of a better way to indicate that with rp.
 * "schedules based on existing Saturday schedules were in effect from March 16 to June 23, 2020, due to the COVID-19 pandemic. These schedules" schedules/schedules/schedules...
 * ✅ Reworded.
 * "July 1, 2020–June 30, 2021" spaced en-dash.
 * "made accessible, with"
 * Not sure what change you're suggesting here.
 * "with MassDOT in" again, spell it out.
 * Ref 46 could use an endash not a hyphen.
 * Ref 46 could use an endash not a hyphen.
 * Ref 46 could use an endash not a hyphen.
 * Thanks for the detailed review! I've addressed most of your comments, with clarification needed on a few. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 06:07, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
 * I looked at the ?'s and can't see any problems! Promoting. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:08, 2 September 2021 (UTC)