Talk:Riverton–Belvidere Bridge/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 17:35, 15 December 2009 (UTC) Comments: I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 17:35, 15 December 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "holding a load of 8 tons (16000 pounds) from Warren County Route 620 (Water Street) in Belvidere to former Pennsylvania Route 709 on the Riverton side.", changed "from" to "and connecting".
 * 2) Change "In 1825, on May 17" to "On May 17, 1825".
 * 3) "the Riverton–Belvidere" sounds colliqual.
 * 4) "did not accept any person to cross" sounds awkward.
 * 5) "the Delaware" also sounds colliqual.
 * 6) "Remnants of the bridge was hurdled downstream" needs to be reworded.
 * 7) The sentence "The festivities were canceled, and disappointed the visitors." is short and awkward.
 * 8) When in 1904 did the bridge transfer to the bridge corporation?
 * 9) "extensive repairs began to the 25-year old structure" sounds awkward.
 * 10) "The structure would face its final test in 1955": change "its final test" to "a test".
 * 11) "The Commission replaced the flooring, repairing or replacing of certain steel portions of the bridge, blast-cleaning and repainting the structure." is a sentence fragment and needs to be reworded into a complete sentence.
 * 12) Fix the link to Delaware Bridge in the crossings navbox.
 * Done with all. The last one is not a GA requirement. Mitch 32(A fortune in fabulous articles can be yours!) 20:01, 15 December 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 20:25, 15 December 2009 (UTC)