Talk:Road Rash 3/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:12, 3 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it on a quick review, so on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 16:20, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Much as I love it, "fisticuffs" seems like an informal term for an encyclopedia.
 * "worldwide locales" settings instead of locales.
 * "need for a marketable feature" all things need to be marketable, was this more for "global" appeal?
 * EA is overlinked in the infobox.
 * Lead should probably mention motorcycle.
 * "in third-place or" no need to hyphenate.
 * "... third-place or higher among..." etc is a complicated sentence! Could you split it?
 * "number of locales around" locations or settings.
 * "access a bike shop" lots of "bike" in this sentence, at least ditch this one.
 * "player may potentially purchase" why potentially? If they can afford it, presumably they can.
 * "at a password entry screen" -> "at an entry screen"
 * "Motorcycle cops" cop is a colloquial term, not encyclopedic.
 * I don't think we need to link "helicopter".
 * "repo man for the bike shop or a snitch" these terms could be linked though.
 * "Breen serving as producer" no need for this serving.
 * What's 3DO?
 * What are "gameplay sprites"?
 * What's Sega CD?
 * complimented or complemented?
 * Link Megadrive.
 * All points have been addressed. Cat&#39;s Tuxedo (talk) 17:21, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Ok, suits me, so promoting. Good work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:25, 3 May 2021 (UTC)