Talk:Road to Germany/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: warrior  4321  18:50, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Prose

 * There is a doesn't in the article. It should be changed to does not.
 * done-- Pedro J. the rookie 02:59, 1 December 2009 (UTC)

Lead

 * Why are there paragraphs with such a low amount of text? Create one or two strong paragraphs.
 * done-- Pedro J. the rookie 02:59, 1 December 2009 (UTC)
 * No, it hasn't. Put all of the information into one paragraph, perhaps?

Production and cultural references

 * Why not make this into a list form with bullets?
 * Its not the best way to make an artical(been tought me that)-- Pedro J. the rookie 02:59, 1 December 2009 (UTC)


 * One line paragraphs are not proper prose. Increase the sentences in the paragraph or sack the line.
 * Done-- Pedro J. the rookie 03:24, 1 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Done-- Pedro J. the rookie 03:24, 1 December 2009 (UTC)


 * All of the facts in this section need references.
 * Eliminated OR-- Pedro J. the rookie 02:59, 1 December 2009 (UTC)

Syndication Cuts

 * Either expand this section or cut it from the article
 * Done-- Pedro J. the rookie 02:59, 1 December 2009 (UTC)

Disambiguation links

 * No issues here

Images

 * More images should be looked up, perhaps on the director or producer? Please remember they have to be free or fair use.
 * Done-- Pedro J. the rookie 02:59, 1 December 2009 (UTC)


 * If you want to prepare for FA criteria, alt text should be added
 * DOne-- Pedro J. the rookie 02:59, 1 December 2009 (UTC)


 * Is the new image added fair use or free use? It seems like a copyright violation to me.
 * Removed-- Pedro J. the rookie 03:24, 1 December 2009 (UTC)

'''The lead had not been fixed as I asked. However, fixing it myself and seeing all other issues addressed, I pass this article to GA quality. warrior  4'''321  04:32, 1 December 2009 (UTC)