Talk:Roar-o-Saurus/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CosXZ (talk · contribs) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

I am still reviewing CosXZ (talk) 22:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC)


 * I got some Stuff I need you to do under 2C CosXZ (talk) 23:59, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Hello, I have responded to both issues. Thank you for your work on the review, I am not exactly sure what is going no with this article, since it is still proposed for merge. I am still somewhat new to editing, so I'm not sure exactly how to continue on with the proposed merge.ReedyTurnip (talk) 13:46, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * More stuff under 2C and Other CommentsCosXZ (talk) 19:11, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
 * CosXZ (talk) 15:33, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
 * I have addressed all the comments. I am very sorry that it has been taking me a few days to respond, I have been busy.ReedyTurnip (talk) 13:20, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

1A
All good CosXZ (talk) 19:24, 11 April 2024 (UTC)

lead/lede
CosXZ (talk) 22:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

layout
CosXZ (talk) 22:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

word choice
CosXZ (talk) 22:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

2A
Looks great CosXZ (talk) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

2B
Overall looks good CosXZ (talk) 17:16, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
 * [1] lesser known primary source
 * [2] secondary source
 * [3] also secondary source
 * [4] primary source
 * [5] I looked at a Featured article that cited Coaster101 and when the article was nominated for featured article, they did a source check and in that article [81] which is a Coaster101 article they said [81] failed verification also looks like someone's opinion.
 * [6] also primary source

2C

 * [5] doesn't mention this information [2] does mention this information
 * fixed
 * The track length is disputed, RCDB says 1240ft, CNN, Coaster101, inparkmagazine, and Daily Sun says 1242ft, and Press Herald and Globe says 1250ft
 * I see that the length to be disputed, I'm not sure exactly what to do, I can maybe replace with "around 1250 feet". I'm not sure what is the best option, please let me know
 * Add a note at saying:  The data on the track length varies according to the sources used.
 * Done
 * put [2] after the comma and [3] after the period
 * Done

2D
I used Earwig and it found 6.5% similarity between the article and the CNN source with "Story Land, Glen, New Hampshire" in the Short Description, "at Story Land in Glen, New Hampshire" in lead/lede, and "The most insane new U.S. roller coasters" in Reception but it shouldn't be a copyright violation ,otherwise, Earwig found nothing copied from the other sources CosXZ (talk) 23:31, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

3A
CosXZ (talk) 17:16, 11 April 2024 (UTC)

3B
CosXZ (talk) 17:16, 11 April 2024 (UTC)

4
No biased information CosXZ (talk) 18:47, 11 April 2024 (UTC)

5
Very stable CosXZ (talk) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

6A
Appropriate Copyright CosXZ (talk) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

6B
Appropriate Image and Caption CosXZ (talk) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

Other comments
Concerned about the merge tag CosXZ (talk) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
 * What does Kentucky Flyer have to do with Roar-o-Saurus
 * It is a similar coaster by the same manufacturer, but this is only really of interest to a small group of enthusiasts, so I removed it.