Talk:Rob Bredl

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I have noticed in an edit summary that the whole article was translated from German Wikipedia. That's fine, because he seems to be obviously notable, but there are still issues to resolve: Minima c  ( talk ) 21:27, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Firstly, it needs cleanup (in this case the punctuation needs to be placed correctly)
 * 2) Some sentences confuse the reader and do not make sense (Like "After only about 2,000 crocodiles have been sighted, began Josef Bredl breed crocodiles.")
 * 3) It needs some copyediting, especially in terms of improving the grammar ("The latest project of the family Bredl Located 50 km south of Airlie Beach") and spelling (e.g. Australien -> Australia).