Talk:Rob Pelinka/GA1

GA Review
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At this time, I am going to fail this, because I feel that this article needs a lot of work yet to be a GA. Wizardman  20:06, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Citation #5 is blank.
 * Kobe Bryant section has a fact tag on it.
 * Education and Honors should be converted into prose.
 * By that same token, some facts are both pointed out and discussed twice, plus with the way it's written the lead seems like the high school and college paragraph rather then a lead.
 * Can the Maggette and Gordon sections be expanded? If not try to make it so that there's not a bunch of two sentence paragraphs.