Talk:Robert Ardini

COI edit requests
Hi, I've been hired by Robert Ardini to request some updates to this article. I know this doesn't fully address the flags at the top of the article, but hopefully it's progress:

1. Replacing the image at the top of the article with an infobox, using a better image:

2. In first sentence:
 * a. Move ref to end of sentence per WP:MOS.
 * b. Update "retired advertising executive" to "politician and former advertising executive", since politics are a major part of Ardini's notability, and he is not considered retired.

3. In first paragraph of "Biography", update "flower fancier" (which is not a known term by any metric I checked) to "rose enthusiast".

4. In second paragraph of "Biography", replace
 * with
 * (Added source, revised for neutrality and to reflect source.)
 * (Added source, revised for neutrality and to reflect source.)
 * (Added source, revised for neutrality and to reflect source.)

5. Next sentence: replace
 * with
 * (Formatting fix, swapped in a secondary source, added detail to reflect source, corrected book title and removed inaccurate genre categorization.)
 * (Formatting fix, swapped in a secondary source, added detail to reflect source, corrected book title and removed inaccurate genre categorization.)
 * (Formatting fix, swapped in a secondary source, added detail to reflect source, corrected book title and removed inaccurate genre categorization.)

6. Last sentence of "Biography": update  to. (Just to contextualize that all candidates pay the same fees to appear on the ballot.)

7. Under "2020 presidential totals" section header, add:

8. For CA's 2020 total, add:

9. For CO's 2020 total, add:

10. For UT's 2020 total, add:

11. Add categories:

Thank you for any feedback/assistance! Mary Gaulke (talk) 14:20, 8 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Here are the changes made.
 * Request #1: Yes check.svg Done, but birth date and residence have been Symbol declined.svg Declined since no source was provided.
 * Request #2 & 3: Yes check.svg Done
 * Request #4: X mark.svg Not done The source provided are (or appear to be) personal blogs, and are generally not reliable sources.
 * Request #5 & 6: X mark.svg Not done since no source was provided.
 * Request #7 ATE 9: Yes check.svg Done
 * Request #10: Yes check.svg Done
 * Request #11: Yes check.svg Done, but births have been Symbol declined.svg Declined see reply for Request #1.
 * &#123;&#123;replyto&#125;&#125; Can I Log In's (talk) page 02:54, 11 April 2020 (UTC)