Talk:Robert Howe (Continental Army officer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 13:54, 12 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi Clark, I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 13:54, 12 April 2013 (UTC)

Quick comment, more to follow tonight or tomorrow:
 * "the Sons of Liberty in the Wilmington area, which was active in protesting the Stamp Act 1765" -- the "which" is slightly ambiguous here--was the Sons of Liberty or the Wilmington area active in protesting the Act? Perhaps which could be replaced with "a group" or "a region", respectively. -- Khazar2 (talk) 14:49, 12 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Done - Changed to "the Wilmington Sons of Liberty organization". Better?   Cdtew  (talk) 23:45, 12 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Perfect, thanks. -- Khazar2 (talk) 00:15, 13 April 2013 (UTC)

Okay, here's a few more. Overall this seems excellent and ripe for promotion, though I've got a few checks left to do. Thanks for your work on expanding this! As last time, I've done some minor cleanup as I went, so please check to make sure I haven't inadvertently introduced any errors, and feel free to revert anything you disagree with.
 * Look good to me!


 * "who refused want to give up" -- should the "want" be cut here? I'm not quite clear what this phrase means.
 * Done


 * "and intentionally fired above his left shoulder" -- is the "his" here "his own" or "Howe's"?
 * Done - supposed to be his own.


 * "the South Carolinian and American Gazette" -- if this is a newspaper, its title should probably be italicized.
 * Done


 * The ISBN for Lefler is displaying as invalid.
 * Done - missed a "0"


 * Not an issue for GA, but the editor parameter isn't showing for the Whitaker citation. -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:00, 13 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Corrected - Thanks for your comments so far!  Cdtew  (talk) 03:04, 13 April 2013 (UTC)