Talk:Robert Ivy

Conflict of Interest
Smtology (talk) 06:33, 14 November 2016 (UTC)

Neutral Point of View - Language
"Career" section makes non-neutral and non-factual claims about Ivy's accomplishments. Additionally, some of the content here isn't about Ivy himself but rather the AIA. See for example: "Under Ivy's leadership since 2011, the AIA is transforming to serve the architecture profession in the 21st century. He is repositioning the AIA from its rich legacy into a proactive, responsive, and influential organization. Chief among his and the organization's goals are heightening public awareness of the value and relevance of all architects."


 * "AIA transforming to serve the architecture profession in the 21st century" is not objective/factual. Also not about Ivy himself.
 * "rich legacy" is not neutral language
 * "proactive, responsive, and influential organization" is not neutral language
 * "is positioning," from a grammatical point of view, does not describe an accomplishment.
 * "Chief among his and the organization's goals are heightening public awareness of the value and relevance of all architects." is not written as a fact.

Smtology (talk) 06:43, 14 November 2016 (UTC)