Talk:Robert J. Henle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:30, 28 January 2021 (UTC)


 * " reduced the budget deficit by increasing enrollment,[18] which increased dramatically in the early 1970s." - Any way that having forms of increase twice in the same sentence?
 * Removed the redundancy.  Ergo Sum  05:14, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Lead implies that the whole series of books was widely used, but the body suggests that only one book in specific was.
 * Clarified.  Ergo Sum  05:13, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

That's about it, I think for GA. Good work. Hog Farm Talk 02:40, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you, .  Ergo Sum  05:15, 29 January 2021 (UTC)