Talk:Robert Mond

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 18:37, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Photograph or portrait should be added from a source with a free license, if available
 * Lead needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
 * Information on research should be expanded and references required
 * References should be expanded, preferably using the inline format
 * External links to useful online resources should be added if available